on Introduction By Decree by Wulf
16 Jan 2003, 10:23 PM
pale rider...bitchin..i heard george thorogood straight thru this.g
on Endymion Dead by vulcan
16 Jan 2003, 10:08 PM
on the way out..they throw vulcan a ten..because his poetry rocks too. yeah..chicky chik chik chaw.?
on Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones
16 Jan 2003, 10:07 PM
Excellent! ladies and gentle men we have been graced this evening with the pride of wales himself...Nicholas Jones..<the crowd of course is completely asleep at this point or in a stupor..not even knowing half way near to where in the fuck wales is [south west england, i believe, capitol, Cardiff, known for steel, coal, welsh cakes..dylanthomas, {still no one moves fat chick farts again and this time giggles} protestants? COME ON PEOPLE! the land of the poets and singers taliesin? Dafydd ap fucking Gwilym the EISTEDDFODD! FOR FUCKS SAKE..three people get up and leave..ah fUCK YOU TOO, SCREAMS BACHUS..come on nick i'll by you a drink, by the way nice poem dude
..do you go to the college of medicine? or saint david? Bachus and nick walk off into the iced over night to find the nearest pub, and a reason to sing anew..
..do you go to the college of medicine? or saint david? Bachus and nick walk off into the iced over night to find the nearest pub, and a reason to sing anew..
on Breathless. by Service
16 Jan 2003, 9:53 PM
wasn't that special. you're classic seven..why ? because you're luckier than us you bastard. a fine balanced poem.
on Turmoil by ThoughtfulSoul
16 Jan 2003, 9:45 PM
yes we do care! no. we can't do a fucking thing about it..let me no when you got the perp in a line up..i'll come hold your hand..see no kids, you can't give a poet like thoughtful soul a bad score cuz they meant well, so you have to do the 6 thing..you know what i mean?
on Drunk Satan by smlink84
16 Jan 2003, 9:43 PM
yes even occassionally poemranker has station identifications from the emergengy broadcast system..sorry about that. and no. he's not the sheriff, or smokey the bear.he was the airconditioning guy out of freon and drunk, we had to let him go. 0.
on Blonded by the Light by w~* ATHENA *~w
16 Jan 2003, 9:40 PM
She pops up regularly.like those over played pop songs that she hijacked these words from, could be original, could be pilfered..who knows, who dares? 5 for staying alive ah ah ah ah. and the bee gees (which stands for brothers gibb, by the way}k
on Society's Sharades by New Life Drug
16 Jan 2003, 9:36 PM
Now here we have an interesting young poet with quite the growing body of great work. different, brave..willing to take chances, yet carrying a sweet and well educated grasp of the english language. an a real fine user name..one of poemrankers emerging young poeties of the future <New Life Drug> [like three crickets chirp, and some drunk chick farts in the back row] nevermind them kid horus says to new life..they're kinda slow. 8!
on PainFul Of LiFe by PoEt MaStEr
16 Jan 2003, 9:31 PM
Here we have some uknown newbie (realy an oldbe masking) making us that much more stupid than any of us realy deserve to be..PoeT MsAter was it? why don't you die home skillet? 0. that's not a request either.
on Another poem by Mutant_X
16 Jan 2003, 9:27 PM
here once again we have mutant x doing everything but mutating. do not attempt to read this shite at home children..it may cause temporary drooling and tart walking.
on Just the Way by w~* ATHENA *~w
16 Jan 2003, 9:24 PM
Here we have athena..and to think she graduated from northwestern with a degree in graphic design, and a minor in creative writing..Not to creative though kiddo, hence the wanker award (which is veiwed as an accomplishment to the disturbed) so you young poets take this as a lesson..don't wank with other peoples material, because it might wank you back! [therefore she get the motionless 5{even worse than the zero}. next/
on Nothin lasts by Mutant_X
16 Jan 2003, 9:20 PM
<yes ladies and gentlemen it's time for that all around infectious bastard once again horus8 [crowd pelts him with joints and g-strings he motions his hands for a hushing effect] good evening poets and frauds it's time for 'random encounters' the only show on poem ranker that allows us to dig into the amateur files, to remember the poets we've lost, and to find the poets we'll need to remember..that undiscovered poet could be you> here we see mutant x taking a wild stab at teenage love and the inevitable bitter seperation of highschool sweethearts, and 'wrist slashing' let's just be friends. 6.
on Old Man by keatsImnot
16 Jan 2003, 2:41 PM
I'm partial to poppies and soldiers, and revolution. Not just because i have the band morphine blaring 11 currently either. nice quick verse here. cut and dry. have a 9.
replying on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin
16 Jan 2003, 2:38 PM
truly hilarious. Your wit is as honed as ever, both your reply to this idiots comment and your mastery of the limerick. bravo. 10!
replying on Clever Device? This is how you hunt angels with an Ashton Kirchner dude where's my car tattoo and legos by horus8
16 Jan 2003, 1:00 PM
Come on, those had nothing to do with your username. You know I love your work, and i think that you are very clever. You just inspired me, and if you listen to the song, it is an unclever device, hence the ashton kirchner mentality and voice i used in the song.
I spoke to Tony tonight, we are going to move forward. Thanks for connecting us.