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The Sky (Other) by jauser
The sky is wide
The sky is high
Up on the black sky
Sometimes cloudy
Sometimes clear
Sometimes have a picture of a deer
Which is pretty lame
The sky filled with many memories
Memories of everybody
Those who having a bad day
Could just look up the sky
And will feel high
Like when just finish smoking weed
Sometimes the sky can be scary
Like when it thunder
It make you wonder
Of how deep is the water
Out on the sea
Out in the river
Sometimes in the bowl
That you just pee in, hehe
The sky is best pretty
When it's fill with star
Star that form into a car
A Honda, a Ford
About $70,000
Too much no one can afford
The sky can be a door
To another world
A fantasy world-
Sometimes it open
To an ugly ass world
Where people get rape
And before the invention of Scotch tape
But all I wants you to know
Is how you, yourself feel
When you look up in the sky
How would you feel
When a dog bite
When a open your leg wide
I guess you don't
Understand what I am talking
About, but someday
Someday, you will...
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0555553
Weighted score: 5.052921
Overall Rank: 6816
Posted: October 4, 2002 5:25 PM PDT; Last modified: October 4, 2002 5:37 PM PDT
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Understand what I am talking
About, but someday
Someday, you will...
well in that part of the poem, you say the reader will understand, but i dont think i will, sorry. i wish i could, but this poem is too fucking out there for me man. sorry, i guess im not up to par on your plane of existence or something, oh well.