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The Sky (Other) by jauser

The sky is wide The sky is high Up on the black sky Sometimes cloudy Sometimes clear Sometimes have a picture of a deer Which is pretty lame The sky filled with many memories Memories of everybody Those who having a bad day Could just look up the sky And will feel high Like when just finish smoking weed Sometimes the sky can be scary Like when it thunder It make you wonder Of how deep is the water Out on the sea Out in the river Sometimes in the bowl That you just pee in, hehe The sky is best pretty When it's fill with star Star that form into a car A Honda, a Ford About $70,000 Too much no one can afford The sky can be a door To another world A fantasy world- Sometimes it open To an ugly ass world Where people get rape And before the invention of Scotch tape But all I wants you to know Is how you, yourself feel When you look up in the sky How would you feel When a dog bite When a open your leg wide I guess you don't Understand what I am talking About, but someday Someday, you will...

horus8 16-Jan-03/9:48 PM
So far this is the winner, don't ask me why, but it's loose and accurate to be sure..not to mention..simple and well written in a complicated fashion...i liked it alot. 10!!




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