poemranker ::Endymion Dead by vulcan

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Free verse № 18710

Endymion Dead

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Oct 2002 · 6 comments

I grew impatient the more I rode over the field For the Moon-beau above me a Castle of Indolence had built And the Earth beneath a mass of mysteries underground. But though I climbed the mountains and explored the valleys "There was evening and there was morning-the Sixth day." I grew impatient the more I rode over the field A man on the hilltop was gazing at the battlements Of an ugly speckled face; Endymion was dead and Moon had become a myth.

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6 comments

[7] little_angel_maria 4-Oct-02/2:21 AM Reply
wicked!!!
[8] Christof 4-Oct-02/5:21 AM Reply
Keats this time? A good and concise response.
[0] -=SeTTle=- 27-Oct-02/7:16 PM Reply
LOOK AT ME I'M LIKE A FUCKING CYBER-TOLKEIN
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> 29-Nov-02/2:10 AM Reply
hahaHA! your killing me has ha! holy shit are you serious?..0.
[8] Quarton 19-Dec-02/2:45 PM Reply
Very nice. No fat and well written. I enjoyed!
[10] horus8 16-Jan-03/10:08 PM Reply
on the way out..they throw vulcan a ten..because his poetry rocks too. yeah..chicky chik chik chaw.?