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Endymion Dead (Free verse) by vulcan
I grew impatient the more I rode over the field For the Moon-beau above me a Castle of Indolence had built And the Earth beneath a mass of mysteries underground. But though I climbed the mountains and explored the valleys "There was evening and there was morning-the Sixth day." I grew impatient the more I rode over the field A man on the hilltop was gazing at the battlements Of an ugly speckled face; Endymion was dead and Moon had become a myth.

Down the ladder: Awe, I'm like so shocked

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.9525743
Overall Rank: 1364
Posted: October 4, 2002 12:30 AM PDT; Last modified: October 4, 2002 12:30 AM PDT
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Comments:
[7] little_angel_maria @ 213.122.88.52 | 4-Oct-02/2:21 AM | Reply
wicked!!!
[8] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 4-Oct-02/5:21 AM | Reply
Keats this time? A good and concise response.
[0] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.69 | 27-Oct-02/7:16 PM | Reply
LOOK AT ME I'M LIKE A FUCKING CYBER-TOLKEIN
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-Nov-02/2:10 AM | Reply
hahaHA! your killing me has ha! holy shit are you serious?..0.
[8] Quarton @ 12.217.212.111 | 19-Dec-02/2:45 PM | Reply
Very nice. No fat and well written. I enjoyed!
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Jan-03/10:08 PM | Reply
on the way out..they throw vulcan a ten..because his poetry rocks too. yeah..chicky chik chik chaw.?
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