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I've got the eaten my crustacean soulmate blues (Lyric) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
My eyes are wet With the wet tears of sadness. How can I live without you? When we first met, My heart filled with gladness. But you were an prawne, So I ate you.

Down the ladder: Endymion Dead

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.9525743
Overall Rank: 1363
Posted: May 14, 2002 2:54 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 5:58 AM PDT
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[8] wlshepherd @ 62.6.144.238 | 15-May-02/9:29 AM | Reply
Prawn?
[3]... anonymous @ 131.111.245.180 | 15-May-02/11:57 AM | Reply
to wlshepherd: No olde man. I think you'll find the correct spelling is "prawne".
[3]... anonymous @ 194.82.103.77 | 16-May-02/12:36 PM | Reply
Yes, but it should be "an prawne"
[7] deleted user @ 66.162.182.22 | 10-Jul-02/11:18 AM | Reply
Quirky, funny, better than that AIDS in a glass thing...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ | 22-Aug-02/4:08 PM | Reply
Don't be silly. Nothing is better than 'AIDS in a Glass'.
[10] <~> @ 24.44.185.41 | 7-Sep-02/3:04 PM | Reply
i love this poeme. i think i'll marry it. oh, wait. the cat's gotten it. damn.
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