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Another poem (Free verse) by Mutant_X
everything is the same nothin actually changed there was a littel cut in my finger that no one would notice,not even me but i can feel it,just a littel cut but it hurts so much when u look at the surface everything is so perfect but when u take a another look and get a littel bit closer u know something is wrong i dunno what it is but i can't feel that potential that used to lay down deep inside my words, suddenly all those words seems so shallow so fake and not real that they don't reveal,what i really feel it doesn't touch my heart when i read it and it doesn't make me cry it's just a nother poem another life and another end

Up the ladder: I can't write

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6363637
Weighted score: 4.318182
Overall Rank: 13117
Posted: October 5, 2002 5:21 AM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2002 5:21 AM PDT
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[2] muffin @ 4.21.197.242 | 23-Oct-02/8:18 PM | Reply
Spelling mistakes and typographical errors should not be made on a piece that is being submitted on the internet. I kinda like the concept but words aren't as vivid as they could be. You need to be a little (sp) stronger in the middle of the poem.
[8] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.69 | 27-Oct-02/6:40 PM | Reply
This is like meta-angst. Pretty interesting stuff.
[4] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Jan-03/9:27 PM | Reply
here once again we have mutant x doing everything but mutating. do not attempt to read this shite at home children..it may cause temporary drooling and tart walking.
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