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Another poem (Free verse) by Mutant_X
everything is the same
nothin actually changed
there was a littel cut in my finger
that no one would notice,not even me
but i can feel it,just a littel cut
but it hurts so much
when u look at the surface
everything is so perfect
but when u take a another look
and get a littel bit closer
u know something is wrong
i dunno what it is
but i can't feel that potential
that used to lay down deep inside
my words,
suddenly all those words
seems so shallow so fake
and not real
that they don't reveal,what i really feel
it doesn't touch my heart when i read it
and it doesn't make me cry
it's just a nother poem
another life
and another end
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Posted: October 5, 2002 5:21 AM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2002 5:21 AM PDT
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