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I can't write (Free verse) by Mutant_X
i can't write coz words would let the tears which i kept in my eyes i can't write coz words would free the fears which i prisoned somewhere in me i can't write coz that would let new demons instead of the ones i've killed before i can't write coz that would blow off the storm and so i write

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6363637
Weighted score: 4.318182
Overall Rank: 13116
Posted: October 5, 2002 5:16 AM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2002 5:16 AM PDT
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Comments:
[10] little_angel_maria @ 213.122.183.120 | 6-Oct-02/12:20 PM | Reply
kool
[0] Bachus @ 24.126.117.82 | 26-Oct-02/9:44 AM | Reply
your right you can't...perhaps you can bullit kiss? or maybe wrist the razor? have fun.0.
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.127 | 28-Oct-02/6:58 AM | Reply
Well, at least the title's honest. I guess I brought it on myself to read this shash, then.0.
[0] Tintagiles @ 142.166.239.207 | 30-Oct-02/8:51 PM | Reply
Nope. You can't write.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 11-Apr-03/10:40 PM | Reply
I wouldn't say that just not well
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