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Zen (Free verse) by necroscope7
One hand claps At the falling tree If they weren?t around Could they still see me?

Up the ladder: No One
Down the ladder: I can't write

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6363637
Weighted score: 4.318182
Overall Rank: 13115
Posted: June 6, 2002 7:49 AM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2002 7:49 AM PDT
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Comments:
[1] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Jul-02/3:48 PM | Reply
You are fired??
[0] ==Doylum @ 213.122.169.69 | 19-Jul-02/5:58 AM | Reply
I thought I was bad
and I am
but....
[10] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 31-Jul-02/8:38 AM | Reply
heh. a 'physically challenged' paranoid zen lumberjack. don't that beat all.
[8] Haleyj @ 24.179.95.25 | 19-Mar-05/9:15 AM | Reply
I really like this poem. Short, simple, and to the point. Just how I like them.
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