on The Militarization of America by Quarton
20 Jan 2003, 4:03 PM
I believe this to be very poetic indeed GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD FOR SINKING NAILS DEEP AND SIMPLE on this fine day. 10! did you ever think that you'd get one?(TGQ), i honestly didn't.
on Award acceptance speach by Bobjim
20 Jan 2003, 3:58 PM
Great speech though...v
on Award acceptance speach by Bobjim
20 Jan 2003, 3:56 PM
Would you be willing to let us in on how you assume anyone could possibly afford to fucking give a shit?
on The Smurfs killed Kennedy by <{Baba^Yaga}>
20 Jan 2003, 3:51 PM
A long sentenced miracle. hack.
on The importance of lighting by blackball
19 Jan 2003, 1:45 AM
Sound like the last dance saved8.
on picture loops by pomoxo
18 Jan 2003, 9:38 PM
My opinion of your poem at second glance gave me the feeling that you dug to deep, and or 'tried too hard'. which is very common at this level of poetic 'excellence'. lol. Perhaps write a pretty, and simple sonnet..to get back to nature. You use very descriptive and powerful words..to many three syllabel words in a row can play fuckidge on the tongue. If you can dig. other than that. I feel that you've gotten off here at a galloping start. I detect something familiar about your writing, but...it doesn't matter. congradulations on the 8 and poem. Enjoy your stay here.
on picture loops by pomoxo
18 Jan 2003, 9:25 PM
Trippy.
replying on A black sanded tropical vision by horus8
18 Jan 2003, 8:35 PM
It's a special greenhouse to grow oranges in during realy bad frostings, and cold weather.
on Don't Think Of Me by Dariana
18 Jan 2003, 6:02 PM
somehow, i don't think thats possible. repent!
on Possibilities by Nicholas Jones
18 Jan 2003, 5:59 PM
and you Know this, ma-an!
on Charlottesville by New Life Drug
18 Jan 2003, 5:57 PM
"I was torn like the lighting in the sky." lightning? i believe this could use a could re-editing. Then it'd be a real tamale.
on The silent moon by UAFANTHORPEY
18 Jan 2003, 5:55 PM
remember scooby doo and the moon beast? great episode.
on Sympathy for a Pig by phbiscuit
18 Jan 2003, 5:53 PM
eggs an such..S
on America by little_angel_maria
18 Jan 2003, 5:21 PM
No, not according to malthusian theorys.
on Confused by planetdicko
18 Jan 2003, 5:17 PM
try asexuality. it works..that and murdering people..for cash...and writing vilanelles helps too.
on why? by little_angel_maria
18 Jan 2003, 5:15 PM
ski jumping is for adults young lady, REPENT IN THE NAME OF JESUS! <body starts to twist and gyrate whilst banging the vulve with the christ doll haaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!> sorry just be moving along now.
replying on Jingoism saved the wingnut by horus8
18 Jan 2003, 5:03 PM
No I haven't written very meany concrete poems. I enjoy this piece, because, well you can read it in a variety of different ways and manners, and having taking this out of what it 'was' for this edit (it was a mess before this), was a hell of a task, i must say...so, thank you, and i appreciate you taking the time to read it.
on Heartless by UAFANTHORPEY
17 Jan 2003, 9:44 PM
would be better maybe,
"For that is all i have ever been."
"For that is all i have ever been."