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The silent moon (Free verse) by UAFANTHORPEY
The moon controls me
Like you control me
And hold me in your iron grip
It abuses me, and hurts me
But I'll always come back
Wait for the moon
So it can hurt me again
Just like i wait for you
What other choice do i have?
What would I be without you,
My moon
I may be better but I wont be the same,
You tell me
I can leave you nay time
But i'll wait for you
And i'll wait for the moon
Aswell
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7500
Posted: October 3, 2002 3:03 AM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2002 3:03 AM PDT
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