poemranker ::The silent moon by UAFANTHORPEY

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Free verse № 18592

The silent moon

by UAFANTHORPEY

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Oct 2002 · 4 comments

The moon controls me Like you control me And hold me in your iron grip It abuses me, and hurts me But I'll always come back Wait for the moon So it can hurt me again Just like i wait for you What other choice do i have? What would I be without you, My moon I may be better but I wont be the same, You tell me I can leave you nay time But i'll wait for you And i'll wait for the moon Aswell

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4 comments

[n/a] worldsofwar 3-Oct-02/4:59 AM Reply
Well done!
[7] Christof 3-Oct-02/7:30 AM Reply
Is this a song lyric? For some reason it sounds like one
[8] Bachus 11-Nov-02/11:16 AM Reply
once the moon made me travel drunk in the wrong direction...i ran out of gas..kicked out both of my headlights..ripped my steering wheel and hood off.then bawled like a baby and blamed my parents for all of it still holding onto my steering wheel as a teddy bear for hours. fucking moon.
[7] horus8 18-Jan-03/5:55 PM Reply
remember scooby doo and the moon beast? great episode.