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For Horus (Free verse) by INTRANSIT This is how we:
Basketball spin the world
Rip stop flag unfurled
Hair pull toilet flush
and alternator brush
Dog kick poke the spit
armageddon in a fist
Lie down couch float
carpet thread sky the smoke
Door knob curb smack
Teeth matches in a rack
Porn bush egg nog soap
whiskey burn string a rope
Light pop oatmeal crash
Stone leg bric-a-brac
Knockwurst into Spam
Cuts you in the can
Christmas tree doused in bleach
Ice flies and burns the beach!
Up the ladder:
want of warmth
Down the ladder:
Spring Rolls
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.5555553
Posted: December 24, 2002 3:12 PM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2002 3:12 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.7777777 Overall Rank: 1724 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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24-Dec-02/3:50 PM
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dude, that's fucking rad. have a REAL BACHIAN SWAGGER AWARD! FOR LAYING PIPE WITH HYPE WHILE HUNTING SNIPE chewy wewwy wicky boo. 10.
i've got this terrible feeling of deja vu...
well done, mockingbird.
zz's right...deja vu. once again, i find myself breaking into billy joel while reading something. damn you people. now it'll be in there all week.
I like it, reminds me of a dream I had once.
every time i read this..i just snicker. 8.
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