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For Horus (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
This is how we: Basketball spin the world Rip stop flag unfurled Hair pull toilet flush and alternator brush Dog kick poke the spit armageddon in a fist Lie down couch float carpet thread sky the smoke Door knob curb smack Teeth matches in a rack Porn bush egg nog soap whiskey burn string a rope Light pop oatmeal crash Stone leg bric-a-brac Knockwurst into Spam Cuts you in the can Christmas tree doused in bleach Ice flies and burns the beach!

Up the ladder: want of warmth
Down the ladder: Spring Rolls

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5555553
Weighted score: 5.7777777
Overall Rank: 1725
Posted: December 24, 2002 3:12 PM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2002 3:12 PM PST
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[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 24-Dec-02/3:50 PM | Reply
dude, that's fucking rad. have a REAL BACHIAN SWAGGER AWARD! FOR LAYING PIPE WITH HYPE WHILE HUNTING SNIPE chewy wewwy wicky boo. 10.
[8] <~> @ 67.84.171.238 | 24-Dec-02/6:53 PM | Reply
i've got this terrible feeling of deja vu...

well done, mockingbird.
[9] brazen @ 65.237.116.252 | 24-Dec-02/10:00 PM | Reply
zz's right...deja vu. once again, i find myself breaking into billy joel while reading something. damn you people. now it'll be in there all week.
[8] kaykat @ 207.170.32.52 | 25-Dec-02/12:01 PM | Reply
I like it, reminds me of a dream I had once.
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Jan-03/9:58 PM | Reply
every time i read this..i just snicker. 8.
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