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want of warmth (Haiku) by <~> he sees me as green
but in this cold, he chooses
to keep with his gray
Up the ladder:
Worldly Wise
Down the ladder:
For Horus
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.5555553
Posted: December 4, 2002 12:28 AM PST; Last modified: December 4, 2002 8:33 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.7777777 Overall Rank: 1724 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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4-Dec-02/1:46 AM
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I cant do haiku sob sob, you can, envy !
another one of your fab 2 way haiku
Writing while drinking.
pah.
What does "pah" mean? I am at a loss when it comes to the spelling of verbal utterances.
why this type of line breaking for the haiku?
decline. slip. away.
is this about you losing a guy to an older woman? i like it, although i don't like old women, sexually, that is. 8 swastikas!
i like 'em young. real young, if you know what i'm saying. 9 swastikas for the young women! (sorry, the snow is making me stir crazy)
sorry about that..had to go play "who wants to be a million heir..would you believe..they shorted me about 900,000.00.. cock suckers..so if you had three wishes what would they be..?
one must be careful what one wishes for. thanks for the reminder, p&k.
actually, both of my sisters were on that show. i dropped the competitive thang early on, so i never even tried to. they got shorted too. it's a fucking conspiracy, h. um, i mean baba. here, help me get him down. <they ease hector to the floor, and begin to kick him. he scampers away and returns almost instantly with a shaker of grey goose martinis. shamed, we lavish him with praise, and continue our interview.>
*wish 1: i would wish for a smart, kind man, who acts based on truth and gets my jokes. one who puts up with me and doesn't kick me out or leave. wish 2: "o give me land lots of land under starry skies above...don't fence me in"...i'd run a wildlife preserve, if i could. wish 3: i will hang onto my 3rd wish, until i need it. i don't need anything more than what i have right now, and needing and wanting are incredible disparate modalities, wouldn't you agree, baba? *(revised, after consulting with my friend who has been lucky enough to find a partner who suits him) 247 view(s)
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