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Heartless (Free verse) by UAFANTHORPEY
It's a jealous moon in a thoughtless sky that decides a time for us dear What I have been through its far too much to say it cries all anyway for I fear One day I'll be gone Before your gone i'm confused and broken With you I could revolve the thoughtless moon But I'm heartless, and so are you For that's all I'll ever be

Up the ladder: Just For Today
Down the ladder: why i look like a man

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.6666665
Overall Rank: 12231
Posted: October 4, 2002 12:45 PM PDT; Last modified: October 4, 2002 12:45 PM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Jan-03/9:44 PM | Reply
would be better maybe,
"For that is all i have ever been."
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