Replying to a comment on:

Heartless (Free verse) by UAFANTHORPEY

It's a jealous moon in a thoughtless sky that decides a time for us dear What I have been through its far too much to say it cries all anyway for I fear One day I'll be gone Before your gone i'm confused and broken With you I could revolve the thoughtless moon But I'm heartless, and so are you For that's all I'll ever be

horus8 17-Jan-03/9:44 PM
would be better maybe,
"For that is all i have ever been."




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001