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why i look like a man (Free verse) by rosiebailey
i look like a man because i got hit by a van while eating a can of beans

Up the ladder: Heartless
Down the ladder: Acknowledgement*

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.6666665
Overall Rank: 12227
Posted: October 8, 2002 6:02 AM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2002 6:03 AM PDT
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[n/a] Blue Magpie @ 62.176.75.100 | 8-Oct-02/6:19 AM | Reply
Do you seriously want me to vote on this.
[2] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-Oct-02/12:29 PM | Reply
you have way too much time on your hands. if i were you i'd donate it to some fucking starving nation in the middle of a desert. cuz it's doing us no fucking good here. apparentlyz
[3] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.100 | 8-Oct-02/1:01 PM | Reply
Either you're a genius like -=Dark_Angel=- or else you're an utter idiot. The jury's still out.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 8-Oct-02/5:24 PM | Reply
Silly, silly nonsense.
[n/a] blackball @ 24.224.134.73 | 8-Oct-02/10:25 PM | Reply
riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight
[n/a] lukehanney @ 212.219.142.161 | 9-Oct-02/6:04 AM | Reply
Trul beautiful

Short, Precise and moving
[n/a] Tom Colebrooke @ 212.219.142.161 | 14-Oct-02/7:59 AM | Reply
Marvelous
[10] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 15-Oct-02/7:49 AM | Reply
Rosie - this is the future. Youa re a visionary.
[n/a] jrtails @ 212.219.142.161 | 16-Oct-02/2:39 AM | Reply
Hmm, Intresting
[n/a] cleverdevice @ 212.219.142.161 | 7-Nov-02/6:11 AM | Reply
Wow, reminds me of an earlier poem no longer with us.
Why?
Oh why?
Must I live this lie?
But I won't die
And go to the sky
And eat this pie
In my tie
Dye-
D Jeans.
[0] Bobjim @ 212.219.142.161 | 8-Jan-03/3:19 AM | Reply
Adam, you definately are not a man. I'll give you 50/50 on being carbon-based. 0
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