poemranker ::PainFul Of LiFe by PoEt MaStEr

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Free verse № 18824

PainFul Of LiFe

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Oct 2002 · 4 comments

Why do people live for? If they're not being cared or worried Why couldnt you just die? Painfull Painfull Painfull Of life If you die , does anyone care ? Because after you die you'll fly on the sky Being an angel on the sky With no worries or feelings Life is really unfair sometimes But when you have love it's always cool Chilling with you girl all day But you never go on a date What a pathetic lover Why couldnt you just DIE

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[5] Dark Angle 5-Oct-02/12:41 AM Reply
why dont you die and then i can survey people to see if they care or not! it will be some good empirical data for your ponderance as to whether anyone cares
[5] jauser › Dark Angle 5-Oct-02/9:02 AM Reply
I Agreed
[0] Tintagiles 31-Oct-02/9:51 PM Reply
Why couldn't you? I doubt anyone cares in this case.
[0] horus8 16-Jan-03/9:31 PM Reply
Here we have some uknown newbie (realy an oldbe masking) making us that much more stupid than any of us realy deserve to be..PoeT MsAter was it? why don't you die home skillet? 0. that's not a request either.