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PainFul Of LiFe (Free verse) by PoEt MaStEr Why do people live for?
If they're not being cared or worried
Why couldnt you just die?
Painfull Painfull Painfull Of life
If you die , does anyone care ?
Because after you die you'll fly on the sky
Being an angel on the sky
With no worries or feelings
Life is really unfair sometimes
But when you have love it's always cool
Chilling with you girl all day
But you never go on a date
What a pathetic lover
Why couldnt you just DIE
Up the ladder:
guilty mind
Down the ladder:
Free
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Posted: October 4, 2002 10:01 PM PDT; Last modified: October 4, 2002 10:01 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.9545455 Overall Rank: 13407 Comments:
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Dark Angle @ 172.191.4.158
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5-Oct-02/12:41 AM
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why dont you die and then i can survey people to see if they care or not! it will be some good empirical data for your ponderance as to whether anyone cares
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jauser @ 199.182.59.146
> Dark Angle
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5-Oct-02/9:02 AM
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I Agreed
Why couldn't you? I doubt anyone cares in this case.
Here we have some uknown newbie (realy an oldbe masking) making us that much more stupid than any of us realy deserve to be..PoeT MsAter was it? why don't you die home skillet? 0. that's not a request either.
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