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Nothin lasts (Free verse) by Mutant_X
there was that delicate layer of tears
surrounding my eyes
that i couldn't see the crowd
and with my hands,i covered my ears
for i didn't want to hear
it all seemed so un real
and i didn't dare to move
to my surprise they were clappin hands
they were feelin so happy
like they didn't know what i feel
that i was on the edge
of my fears and thoughts and pain
and it seemed very easy to get insane
it was only him,his vision among
all the people i didn't know
he was peace and comfort
among all the tears and fears
his vision was truth among all the lies
as a ray of light that shines
when the dawn seems yet very far
only he knew what i felt
he knew it was the greatest pain
and i saw the sadness in his eyes
i saw a faint of light
that slowly fades away
i felt his arms around me
despite the metres between us
it was way far sensable than reality
space was nothin to us,
it's almost too real to verbalize
time stopped
space freezed
it was only me and him in the universe
the last two creatures on Earth
that seems to be an end,but it's a start
and in the noise,i heard silence,
only his words were knockin my ears
he said just close ur eyes
soon the sun would rise
it's gonna be over,
no pain lasts forever.
he was right,it doesn't last forever
maybe we can't stay together
but it doens't matter,
coz at a point everything seems to fade away
even life itself
still only that memory of him
there's nothing more to say
what we have is way stronger than society
it would last despite the bitter reality
and i know i would always hold a thought of him
through all the times and places
i know i'm safe,and i know it'll be ok
as i always remember i aint alone
in this huge place
i know i have a trace
as long as i love him.
goodbye,was all he said
i'll meet you in your dreams.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.663823
Overall Rank: 12261
Posted: September 28, 2002 5:14 AM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2002 5:26 AM PDT
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