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Me and She. (Free verse) by peach835
There is me and there is she. She rules me, she hides me, she imprisions me. She makes it impossiable for me to break free And blinds me so I can not see. What's it like to see? What's it like to be free? What's it like to be me? Can you see me or do you see she? Can you sinse the me that is me? Would God still love me if I was me? Does it even matter? I can sinse that me that is me, But I can not see the me that wants to be. Whats it like to be free and whats it like to see? Perhaps I should ask she.

Up the ladder: Babys Got Blue Eyes
Down the ladder: Nothin lasts

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.663823
Overall Rank: 12255
Posted: September 20, 2002 11:44 PM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2002 11:44 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.237 | 23-Sep-02/5:52 AM | Reply
Circ-ular! Love it! Fun! Poignant too.8
[1] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.92 | 22-Oct-02/11:48 AM | Reply
Eee. I hope this is meant to be a joke. Line eleven doesn't rhyme. And what's 'sinse'?
[3] pomoxo @ 209.179.212.101 | 20-Jan-03/5:56 PM | Reply
sense not sinse
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