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Free verse № 16418

Me and She.

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Sep 2002 · 3 comments

There is me and there is she. She rules me, she hides me, she imprisions me. She makes it impossiable for me to break free And blinds me so I can not see. What's it like to see? What's it like to be free? What's it like to be me? Can you see me or do you see she? Can you sinse the me that is me? Would God still love me if I was me? Does it even matter? I can sinse that me that is me, But I can not see the me that wants to be. Whats it like to be free and whats it like to see? Perhaps I should ask she.

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[8] INTRANSIT 23-Sep-02/5:52 AM Reply
Circ-ular! Love it! Fun! Poignant too.8
[1] Tintagiles 22-Oct-02/11:48 AM Reply
Eee. I hope this is meant to be a joke. Line eleven doesn't rhyme. And what's 'sinse'?
[3] pomoxo 20-Jan-03/5:56 PM Reply
sense not sinse