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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award:
for appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising.
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Babys Got Blue Eyes (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~w
This town is insane had brunch with Billy Zane. Today Last night went down to the martini lounge hung around. Got hungry and went outside wanted some pasta or maybe something fried. Saw a little dog running running by the 7 11 he saw me and wanted to cross the road, I breathed, no, don't go he went. He was hit I said shit. That was last night, he yelped for a bit and then ran away. The bar guys said... hey, he is just a neighborhood dog. Dogs in the hood have more lives than men I guess. Took the metro down to Hermosa today what can I say? Anyway. This black man on the bus said don't let them take me away Doris Day. I told him I wouldn't.

Up the ladder: wHEN mY wATER rUNS dRY
Down the ladder: Me and She.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.663823
Overall Rank: 12254
Posted: September 13, 2002 11:45 PM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2002 11:45 PM PDT
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Comments:
[4] pete @ 194.222.69.43 | 14-Sep-02/12:12 AM | Reply
:-) ...... 4
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 14-Sep-02/10:16 AM | Reply
This poeme is ace!!
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Sep-02/12:44 PM | Reply
indeed. 8/10.??
[n/a] w~* ATHENA *~w @ 66.32.132.8 > horus8 | 14-Sep-02/10:34 PM | Reply
soemtimes the best ones come from a good adventure, no?

:D
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