poemranker ::Babys Got Blue Eyes by ~* ATHENA *~

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Babys Got Blue Eyes

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

This town is insane had brunch with Billy Zane. Today Last night went down to the martini lounge hung around. Got hungry and went outside wanted some pasta or maybe something fried. Saw a little dog running running by the 7 11 he saw me and wanted to cross the road, I breathed, no, don't go he went. He was hit I said shit. That was last night, he yelped for a bit and then ran away. The bar guys said... hey, he is just a neighborhood dog. Dogs in the hood have more lives than men I guess. Took the metro down to Hermosa today what can I say? Anyway. This black man on the bus said don't let them take me away Doris Day. I told him I wouldn't.

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4 comments

[4] pete 14-Sep-02/12:12 AM Reply
:-) ...... 4
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Sep-02/10:16 AM Reply
This poeme is ace!!
[8] horus8 14-Sep-02/12:44 PM Reply
indeed. 8/10.??
[n/a] w~* ATHENA *~w › horus8 14-Sep-02/10:34 PM Reply
soemtimes the best ones come from a good adventure, no?

:D