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The TRust That Was Unreal (Free verse) by wootness
Anger fills my every thought, Thinking of things I forgot. Of all the things I should have said, To get me by another day. All the times I found out how I feel, I held it all inside until I met you. You told me to let it all out without a care, Express to the world that life's unfair. But never have I trusted someone so much, With every single caressing touch. Thoughts of you flash in my head, Then sometimes I wish you were dead. Then when I see or hear your voice, It makes me feel like I have no choice. But to feel so ignorant compared to you, And some of the things that you would do. I'd ask myself why I would let you make me feel that way, Then I remembered you told me that if I trusted you, you would make everything okay. ~wootness

Up the ladder: Nothin lasts
Down the ladder: Forever in love

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.663823
Overall Rank: 12262
Posted: October 3, 2002 5:46 PM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2002 5:46 PM PDT
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[n/a] confuzdlilgirl @ 12.75.170.99 | 3-Oct-02/8:29 PM | Reply
awesome poem!! its easy to relate and made so its not completely personal but justified to fit almost anyone!! in same place right now!!
[1] Dark Angle @ 172.191.4.158 | 5-Oct-02/12:57 AM | Reply
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