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triple suicide server line (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub
1. oh dear another cry for help echoes on the screen why do I feel so much for the suicide typo? because I understand that sense of obsessed loneliness? the indulgence is sickening but so good. the pure bitter line of creation is truth. 2. Poetgirl, you make me sad there is a purity in the dark of your words you are obviously young & sensitive trying to cope but I don't know you & never will hope. so why do I say such things? I bite my nails in the blue light of a monitor and sigh keep writing, keep going, keep living. there is something there is something there is silence 3. the only thing worse than living is to die alone with the drone of unhooked phone get stoned find that warm spot by the heater a sudden unexpected note and a simple handshake are profound. death will come anyway, wash out that wound, and listen for the sound of the birds at your morning window. But don't forget to smash that asshole in the face when he comes around to collect.

Up the ladder: Lost
Down the ladder: mornings, january

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.4
Weighted score: 6.2
Overall Rank: 975
Posted: December 9, 2002 9:55 AM PST; Last modified: December 9, 2002 9:55 AM PST
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[9] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 9-Dec-02/11:13 AM | Reply
and blame it on your meds.
well done, sirrah.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 > <~> | 9-Dec-02/11:22 AM | Reply
...and i thank you. I wasn't sure about this one...
[9] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.13 | 9-Dec-02/12:11 PM | Reply
very nice.
[8] god'swife @ 209.179.214.64 | 9-Dec-02/12:25 PM | Reply
Suicide Typo, is an affective play, you are a very good writer.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.106 | 9-Dec-02/1:18 PM | Reply
I've been through two suicides in my life now.(not me)I'm hardening to them quickly. They're sad and selfish. nothing more. funny write.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Jan-03/8:37 PM | Reply
And there you have it folks! a half an hour with Bill and Horus8, come see us next week, same time, same place....on "LETS COOK WITH SULPHUR" thanks for watching us...coming up next Bachus interviews Nicholas jones in an exlusive behind the scenes conversation with the famous welsh poet. See you there..thanks for tuning into the 'eye of horus' on poemranker's underground channel "Quaker". <brought to you by 'dismal glasses' the only way wear shades and 'fotohut' more than just thatch and 5 by 7 double prints>
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