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Lost (Free verse) by Birdman42s
Lost
I can see the sunrise
and how it opens the day.
Peeking through the trees
as though a gate to Heaven's way.
I can see the raindrops
and how they dance upon the ground
Flowing to the river's mouth
the music's sounds softly but loud.
I can see the lightning
in search of a place to die
then how it disappears
in the blink of an eye.
I can see the rainbow
and the promises it made
From here to there it owns
an endless amount of space.
And I can see the sunset
trying to hide it's blaze,
But when you're in the darkest of days
these visions seem to lose their way.
DLB
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.4
Weighted score: 6.2
Overall Rank: 986
Posted: September 19, 2002 8:53 PM PDT; Last modified: September 19, 2002 8:53 PM PDT
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