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Lost (Free verse) by Birdman42s
Lost I can see the sunrise and how it opens the day. Peeking through the trees as though a gate to Heaven's way. I can see the raindrops and how they dance upon the ground Flowing to the river's mouth the music's sounds softly but loud. I can see the lightning in search of a place to die then how it disappears in the blink of an eye. I can see the rainbow and the promises it made From here to there it owns an endless amount of space. And I can see the sunset trying to hide it's blaze, But when you're in the darkest of days these visions seem to lose their way. DLB

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.4
Weighted score: 6.2
Overall Rank: 986
Posted: September 19, 2002 8:53 PM PDT; Last modified: September 19, 2002 8:53 PM PDT
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[10] deleted user @ 195.93.33.7 | 3-Nov-02/7:10 AM | Reply
You're very good!
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