| Re: Flat chested feeling by Tiggy (a welder II) by horus8 |
14-Jun-03/9:23 PM |
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horus... horus... tsk tsk.
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| Re: a comment on In (ghazal) by INTRANSIT |
14-Jun-03/9:16 PM |
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oh sweet romantix, if i may interject thy willowy serenading. i love the last line, but i want to be led there on streaming chrome shiny wind in my ears through the lonely blare of headlights. you r almost there.
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| Re: a comment on wish by daniella |
14-Jun-03/9:08 PM |
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as a matter of faqs, i had scribbled this on my wall in my bedroom suite.....
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| Re: dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/11:06 PM |
you have got something going on here mirrored in other verses i have seen of yours. good going.
am out of here.. spent!
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| Re: fragment by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/11:03 PM |
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trim the cadence by breaking these lines in half at the beat point..... or not
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| Re: what little I know by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/10:59 PM |
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complex issues well beyond our ken
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| Re: with no words to write (v2) by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/10:52 PM |
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| Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/10:45 PM |
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did you use a dictaphone for this baby?
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| Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Jun-03/10:11 PM |
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Jun-03/9:58 PM |
miscreant, a powdered white hairpiece behooves you on this, a momentous occasion
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| Re: Blade by Blade |
4-Jun-03/9:49 PM |
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is this a rhetorical question?
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| Re: a comment on My Friend? by Blade |
4-Jun-03/9:46 PM |
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indeed you saucy reeling-ripe nut-hook
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| Re: Theology by dougsoderstrom |
4-Jun-03/9:43 PM |
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God hath given you one face and you make an ass of it
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| Re: Stealing lightning from the pulpit by horus8 |
4-Jun-03/9:40 PM |
You scullion! You rampallian! You fustilarian! I'll tickle your catastrophe!
----Henry IV, part 2
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| Re: While mining in Tanzania by Bachus |
4-Jun-03/9:39 PM |
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be "stew'd'in brine, smarting in lingering pickle"
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| Re: My girl by simone_girard |
4-Jun-03/9:36 PM |
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don't let the unhaired heads vex you. keep the words going til they lie right with your heartbeat.
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| Re: To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Jun-03/9:28 PM |
Thou art violently carried away from grace.
---Henry IV, part I
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| Re: a comment on E tu trabajo el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
4-Jun-03/9:27 PM |
You are as rheumatic as two dry toasts.
---Henry IV, part 2
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| Re: a comment on My Children Will by daniella |
4-Jun-03/9:24 PM |
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i just love writing with kids
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| Re: Mississipi Murder by scitz |
2-Jun-03/6:49 AM |
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excellent first draught. work this. mississippi
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