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Blade (Free verse) by Blade Why OH why
do i need to kill
suck your blood
and need to fill
the insatiable thirst
stuck in my head
Up the ladder:
eat a grape please
Down the ladder:
My Sun
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Posted: October 3, 2002 5:02 AM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2002 5:02 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.1250396 Overall Rank: 13291 Comments:
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little_angel_maria @ 213.122.88.52
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4-Oct-02/2:28 AM
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ok, scary but good
Pretty good, but extremely evil. Are you strange or something..
Very vampirish or witchy.
(stake trough blade's heart) That was for the crime you comitted against poetry. Go back to playing live action Vampire:the masquerade
At least he calls himself Blade instead of Lestat.
Hmmm
because you're a cad?
Off
I was really liking your work till then. You sair, are a cad!
I was really liking your work till then. You sir, are a cad!
I was really liking your work till then. You sir, are a cad!
Ok Blade, its quite good really. (your still a cad though,)
I'd say you suck, but the plastic fangs probably get in the way.
If blade is a knife object the poem works for me but if blade is a is a person then it is harder to swallow.
Ooooh, bitchin'
Oh, and by the way-Blade isn't really a wannabe vampire at all, he's just sucker-punched the lot of you, so you can now disregard anyhting he says (like you regarded it anyway...)
This sucks
This WOULD have been good if the third line was replaced with "suck your blod".
because you are retarded?
Hey dick! Do you think that you can rearrange shit as you wish? watch this.
is this a rhetorical question?
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