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Free verse № 240

eat a grape please

by skaskowski

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 17 comments

solid black marker on the desk next to my keyboard Permanent. And a game controller and a mouse and games. how i want to play them. okay. Am i in? Yes. One more episode And it is being set up. But i must urinate first. I must piss first.

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17 comments

[2] anonymous 14-Jul-01/3:34 PM Reply
I enjoy realism in poetry. Poems written in the moment!
[n/a] nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply
umm. hmm. I don't get it in the slightest. :( What's up with the marker? Burning copies of the games? Are you in? One more episode? ...
[n/a] Been Here Before 9-May-02/1:30 AM Reply
Next to his keyboard: Crack rocks. Crack rocks the size of his HEAD.
[2] anonymous 10-May-02/8:24 AM Reply
utter crap
[7] deleted user 11-Jul-02/10:10 PM Reply
There's something cracked about this I like.
[6] lynnstratton 12-Jul-02/6:47 PM Reply
sounds like my house on a Friday night ten years ago, getting on line and playing until dawn.
[6] lynnstratton 12-Jul-02/6:47 PM Reply
sounds like my house on a Friday night ten years ago, getting on line and playing until dawn.
[10] horus8 15-Jul-02/3:37 PM Reply
Turn off star trek episode 17. and slowly back away from the TVset, and no matter how much you beg I'm not giving you any more Amphetamines.
[n/a] razorgrin 15-Jul-02/3:44 PM Reply
C'mon horus, give him a little more.It might be funny.
[3] deleted user 9-Aug-02/2:09 PM Reply
This poem means absoutly nothing! And what's up with repeating everything(almost everything)twice? : how does this sound: But i must pee first.I must piss first? To me that sounds stupid repeating everythin tiwce. To me it sounds like he wrote this poem while he was in the restroom taking a piss!( Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss the toilet when ur in the potty!
[3] deleted user 9-Aug-02/2:11 PM Reply
To me it sound stupid and means nothing! And what's up with this repeating everything(almost everything) twice? take a look at the last 2 lines of the poem they both mean the same thig except one is slang for the other! To me it sounds like he wrote this while he was taking a piss! Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss thr toilet when ur doing ur business ok?
[3] deleted user 9-Aug-02/2:12 PM Reply
To me it sound stupid and means nothing! And what's up with this repeating everything(almost everything) twice? take a look at the last 2 lines of the poem they both mean the same thig except one is slang for the other! To me it sounds like he wrote this while he was taking a piss! Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss thr toilet when ur doing ur business ok? we dont want anything getting on the floor!
[3] deleted user 9-Aug-02/2:13 PM Reply
To me it sound stupid and means nothing! And what's up with this repeating everything(almost everything) twice? take a look at the last 2 lines of the poem they both mean the same thig except one is slang for the other! To me it sounds like he wrote this while he was taking a piss! Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss thr toilet when ur doing ur business ok? we dont want anything getting on the floor! because then ur gonna have to write a poem about that too!
[3] deleted user 9-Aug-02/2:14 PM Reply
To me it sound stupid and means nothing! And what's up with this repeating everything(almost everything) twice? take a look at the last 2 lines of the poem they both mean the same thig except one is slang for the other! To me it sounds like he wrote this while he was taking a piss! Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss thr toilet when ur doing ur business ok? we dont want anything getting on the floor! because then ur gonna have to write a poem about that too!
[3] deleted user 9-Aug-02/2:16 PM Reply
Oh my god did i enter the same thing more than once? Maybe because it sounds like the LAST 2 LINES OF THE POEM?
[2] Tascobar 17-Aug-02/3:58 PM Reply
I think the most constructive comment I am able to muster is simply thus: Occasionally you should consider leaving your room. Shambolic. 2/10, and that is considering that I am feeling particularly generous on this night.
[1] wordsphincter 17-Sep-02/11:43 PM Reply
dude, just give up