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eat a grape please (Free verse) by skaskowski

solid black marker on the desk next to my keyboard Permanent. And a game controller and a mouse and games. how i want to play them. okay. Am i in? Yes. One more episode And it is being set up. But i must urinate first. I must piss first.

IgotIssuez99 9-Aug-02/2:14 PM
To me it sound stupid and means nothing! And what's up with this repeating everything(almost everything) twice? take a look at the last 2 lines of the poem they both mean the same thig except one is slang for the other! To me it sounds like he wrote this while he was taking a piss! Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss thr toilet when ur doing ur business ok? we dont want anything getting on the floor! because then ur gonna have to write a poem about that too!




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