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eat a grape please (Free verse) by skaskowski

solid black marker on the desk next to my keyboard Permanent. And a game controller and a mouse and games. how i want to play them. okay. Am i in? Yes. One more episode And it is being set up. But i must urinate first. I must piss first.

IgotIssuez99 9-Aug-02/2:09 PM
This poem means absoutly nothing! And what's up with repeating everything(almost everything)twice? : how does this sound: But i must pee first.I must piss first? To me that sounds stupid repeating everythin tiwce. To me it sounds like he wrote this poem while he was in the restroom taking a piss!( Oh yea and one more thing star-trek wannabe dont miss the toilet when ur in the potty!




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