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eat a grape please (Free verse) by skaskowski

solid black marker on the desk next to my keyboard Permanent. And a game controller and a mouse and games. how i want to play them. okay. Am i in? Yes. One more episode And it is being set up. But i must urinate first. I must piss first.

Tascobar 17-Aug-02/3:58 PM
I think the most constructive comment I am able to muster is simply thus: Occasionally you should consider leaving your room. Shambolic. 2/10, and that is considering that I am feeling particularly generous on this night.




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