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Blade (Free verse) by Blade

Why OH why do i need to kill suck your blood and need to fill the insatiable thirst stuck in my head

Dan garcia-Black 6-Nov-02/10:57 PM
If blade is a knife object the poem works for me but if blade is a is a person then it is harder to swallow.




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