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Free verse № 61

My Sun

by T. Becquerel

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 9 comments

She, the fusion of my sun, rains energy on my world indifferent to her power.

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9 comments

[6] anonymous 21-Jun-01/11:44 PM Reply
I don't get "the fusion of my sun"...
[6] anonymous 21-Jun-01/11:49 PM Reply
I particularly enjoyed the imagery of this poem.
[6] anonymous 6-Aug-01/2:24 PM Reply
It's the word "indifferent" that is throwing me off.
[5] nentwined 17-Mar-02/2:33 PM Reply
I'm not quite sure I get this. You're personifying the action of fusion?
[5] nentwined 23-Apr-02/3:07 AM Reply
hmm.
[2] Tascobar 6-Sep-02/6:26 AM Reply
Uandulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.
[2] Tascobar 6-Sep-02/6:28 AM Reply
Unadulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.
[2] Tascobar 6-Sep-02/6:30 AM Reply
Unadulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.
[2] Tascobar 6-Sep-02/6:30 AM Reply
Unadulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.