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fragment (Free verse) by nentwined
a part of me is gone but the pain remains the same another day is lost, bloody grains of sand never quite congealing, rough as death's own beard scraping off my flesh, toying with my fears

Up the ladder: Girl of my Dreams???

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.875
Weighted score: 6.862451
Overall Rank: 290
Posted: December 6, 2002 6:51 AM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2002 6:51 AM PST
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[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Dec-02/12:25 PM | Reply
i hate that...when that happens.
[n/a] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > Bachus | 6-Dec-02/3:50 PM | Reply
:heh: what's the beep on the end for? :)
[6] daniella @ 200.68.202.74 | 4-Jun-03/11:03 PM | Reply
trim the cadence by breaking these lines in half at the beat point..... or not
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