poemranker ::Girl of my Dreams??? by thepinkbunnyofdoom

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Free verse № 121639

Girl of my Dreams???

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Mar 2005 · 3 comments

Who do you think your kidding girl My dreams are nightmares and they don't include you Yeah, you're a teenage drama queen But when your heroes come from the covers of seventeen Do you think you have a chance of pulling back my curtains And just because you know the words to the chorus Doesn't mean you understand the verse Look at my smile, and listen to my voice Pay attention because I'm only going to say this once You're looking at this from the wrong end And I don't mean to be rude but you're failing To notice that its not me dreaming of you It takes two to tango, and I'm not dressed for the part So while you're wearing your best dress and high heels Waiting on the dance floor, for me and the spotlight Don't be surprised when I'm not there Who do you think your kidding girl While your still sticking close to the shallows I'm diving down into the depths of the deep end When you think that skin and lips mean everything I could steal a kiss, and break you into pieces It'd just be my latest in a long line of infractions Construct the interactions and intercourse Then burn the evidence You're the one dreaming of me And if you can't see that, then think Don't let the chemicals blind you to the truth I don't want you and this photograph is your proof That I've been there, done that, and I'm not heading back

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3 comments

[6] Dovina 12-Mar-05/11:15 AM Reply
An interesting romance to follow as it winds through the ranker.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › Dovina 12-Mar-05/11:18 PM Reply
Actually this is about one of my little sister's friends hitting on me.
[10] zodiac 12-Mar-05/11:00 PM Reply
Your life is very dramatic. -10-