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E tu trabajo el prostitute (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
Wine stained full lips quiver in Santa Barbara. Hitchhiking home along majestic hidden beaches. Cannabis morning stares and giggles in Temecula. Golden eagle gobbles entrails up on a flatrock. Powdering noses until the glowing bursts of Vegas. Limosine driver's a voyeuristicly appealing blonde. Tri-tip-steak and German foamers at a Laguna hotel. Six-string-guitar solos under a full moon's waxing. Fishing for yellowfin out off gorgeous Catalina. My skin can get no darker bronze than this love. On my knees praying to gods in magical Joshua tree. Owls talk to me instead while the camp fire red outs. I have taken nothing for granted but myself, this life. These places in the light, and the night, survive me. Making me who I am, not what I am liable to do.

Up the ladder: Day to Day
Down the ladder: The makings of a killer

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.8
Weighted score: 6.4
Overall Rank: 779
Posted: May 28, 2003 10:56 AM PDT; Last modified: June 4, 2003 12:23 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 28-May-03/3:39 PM | Reply
Write a poeme about the old jew who comes on your face.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 28-May-03/3:48 PM | Reply
Impossible, I'm a top, that goes against the laws of physics, and I enjoy giving, see. Unless of course you mean our antics in the antigravity chamber of your stable?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > Bachus | 28-May-03/4:01 PM | Reply
I do beg your pardon. I meant, of course, the old jew on whose face you come.
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 28-May-03/4:07 PM | Reply
Which one David Gerffen, Barry Duller, Sid crofte, Philip symour Hoffemane, the list goes and goes and, Alexise Arquette?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > Shardik | 28-May-03/4:13 PM | Reply
Philip symour Hoffemane.
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 28-May-03/4:20 PM | Reply
Michael Ironside. lol.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > Shardik | 28-May-03/10:16 PM | Reply
No Michael no! not on your scar! lol.
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 28-May-03/8:37 PM | Reply
Errr. ah, red hair down there.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 18-Jun-03/12:13 PM | Reply
I meant Alexasse Briquette, but naturally you knew that.
[n/a] daniella @ 200.68.202.74 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 4-Jun-03/9:27 PM | Reply
You are as rheumatic as two dry toasts.
---Henry IV, part 2
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 4-Jun-03/12:36 PM | Reply
"Making me who I am, not what I am liable to do."

Surely the fact that you have written this poeme contradicts the idea that your magical experiences are so ineffable as to not affect your behaviour.
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