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what I saw at work today

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Dec 2002 · 5 comments

nimble grey mouse can't tremblekick out of this sticky square fate. I count only four paws how did you move so fast between the shopgirl's legs? insignificant soft dart on smudged tiles and under doors in a world no one knows I'm truly sorry but you've got to go.

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5 comments

[9] wOrnella Mutiw 28-Dec-02/12:12 PM Reply

hahaaaaaaaaa....have you seen the rats in the subway stations in NYC...holly shit...they are huge! Anyway, here's a 9 for making me laugh.

[9] ecargo 28-Dec-02/12:18 PM Reply

Good work, Mr. Bub. Deserves a better title.

[9] nentwined 28-Dec-02/3:22 PM Reply

damn. cheeky but poignant.

I like the title (what I saw at work today), though perhaps something fancier might identify it better.

[n/a] god'swife 29-Dec-02/12:25 AM Reply

Did you throw him in the can and close the lid?

[9] daniella 14-Jun-03/9:29 PM Reply

squeaky dissertation