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what I saw at work today (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub nimble grey mouse
can't
tremblekick out
of this sticky square fate.
I count only four paws
how did you move so fast
between the shopgirl's legs?
insignificant soft dart
on smudged tiles
and under doors
in a world no one knows
I'm truly sorry
but you've got to go.
Up the ladder:
Coloured waifs home
Down the ladder:
Censor
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Posted: December 28, 2002 11:03 AM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2002 11:03 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.45 Overall Rank: 729 Comments:
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wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.26.167
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28-Dec-02/12:12 PM
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hahaaaaaaaaa....have you seen the rats in the subway stations in NYC...holly shit...they are huge! Anyway, here's a 9 for making me laugh.
Good work, Mr. Bub. Deserves a better title.
damn. cheeky but poignant.
I like the title (what I saw at work today), though perhaps something fancier might identify it better.
Did you throw him in the can and close the lid?
squeaky dissertation
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