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what I saw at work today (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

nimble grey mouse can't tremblekick out of this sticky square fate. I count only four paws how did you move so fast between the shopgirl's legs? insignificant soft dart on smudged tiles and under doors in a world no one knows I'm truly sorry but you've got to go.

nentwined 28-Dec-02/3:22 PM
damn. cheeky but poignant.

I like the title (what I saw at work today), though perhaps something fancier might identify it better.




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