Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
2-Jun-03/6:45 AM |
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Re: Mississipi Murder by scitz |
2-Jun-03/6:49 AM |
excellent first draught. work this. mississippi
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Re: To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Jun-03/9:28 PM |
Thou art violently carried away from grace.
---Henry IV, part I
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regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Jun-03/9:31 PM |
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Re: My girl by simone_girard |
4-Jun-03/9:36 PM |
don't let the unhaired heads vex you. keep the words going til they lie right with your heartbeat.
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Re: While mining in Tanzania by Bachus |
4-Jun-03/9:39 PM |
be "stew'd'in brine, smarting in lingering pickle"
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Re: Stealing lightning from the pulpit by horus8 |
4-Jun-03/9:40 PM |
You scullion! You rampallian! You fustilarian! I'll tickle your catastrophe!
----Henry IV, part 2
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Re: Theology by dougsoderstrom |
4-Jun-03/9:43 PM |
God hath given you one face and you make an ass of it
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Re: Blade by Blade |
4-Jun-03/9:49 PM |
is this a rhetorical question?
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Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Jun-03/9:58 PM |
miscreant, a powdered white hairpiece behooves you on this, a momentous occasion
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Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Jun-03/10:11 PM |
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Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/10:45 PM |
did you use a dictaphone for this baby?
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Re: with no words to write (v2) by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/10:52 PM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Jun-03/10:54 PM |
grab a smoke, regain it and climb her again. she will surprise you when you peak.
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Re: what little I know by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/10:59 PM |
complex issues well beyond our ken
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Re: fragment by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/11:03 PM |
trim the cadence by breaking these lines in half at the beat point..... or not
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Re: dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/11:06 PM |
you have got something going on here mirrored in other verses i have seen of yours. good going.
am out of here.. spent!
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Re: Flat chested feeling by Tiggy (a welder II) by horus8 |
14-Jun-03/9:23 PM |
horus... horus... tsk tsk.
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Re: what I saw at work today by Bill Z Bub |
14-Jun-03/9:29 PM |
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Re: and love, an envy by richa |
20-Jun-03/8:11 PM |
tastes as the grit of invention. bravo
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