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and love, an envy (Free verse) by richa
Accepting her drink from a stranger, With ice, a spring water Daring, as the poet to meet dylan To let her flaws sit, Amongst the light of a silver cold, Her soil warm lips, A small measure, and love, an envy


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Arithmetic Mean: 8.727273
Weighted score: 6.8636365
Overall Rank: 287
Posted: June 19, 2003 10:03 AM PDT; Last modified: June 20, 2003 1:48 PM PDT
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[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 19-Jun-03/10:51 AM | Reply
The last two lines really cinch it up. Soil warm lips and hips I wager.
[8] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 20-Jun-03/1:50 AM | Reply
her soil warm lips !

mmmmm

What a beautiful description 8
[9] Fear of Garbage @ 64.56.114.157 | 20-Jun-03/3:28 PM | Reply
mmm
this is beautiful
[9] daniella @ 200.68.202.207 | 20-Jun-03/8:11 PM | Reply
tastes as the grit of invention. bravo
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