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and love, an envy (Free verse) by richa

Accepting her drink from a stranger, With ice, a spring water Daring, as the poet to meet dylan To let her flaws sit, Amongst the light of a silver cold, Her soil warm lips, A small measure, and love, an envy

horus8 19-Jun-03/10:51 AM
The last two lines really cinch it up. Soil warm lips and hips I wager.




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