Re: Russian Roulette by <~>	27-Dec-02/7:12 PM
this is AMAZING....i mean its so....amazing...i love that last stanza...ten all the way
Re: a comment on im playing basketball by rockinindividual	27-Dec-02/6:07 PM
i dont even know what my anger was about...often i just go out and play when i feel something boiling up inside me that i cant contain and just want to get rid of. i'll think about your advice though...i can see a story coming out of this...thank you!
Re: Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl	27-Dec-02/4:12 PM
seems too short...you're reading and then its like "wait...where did the rest of the poem go?"...5
Re: A Short Letter by Ranger	27-Dec-02/4:11 PM
'for at night these words seem so much coarser'...totally true...9
Re: Friends Beyond the Storm by loneshadow29	27-Dec-02/4:07 PM
lovely poem...8
Re: On a chill morning by razorgrin	27-Dec-02/3:49 PM
9
Re: Deep Inner Pain by razorgrin	27-Dec-02/3:45 PM
haha i love this. i sliced a chunk off my thumb with a cheese grater once. evil things, those metal contraptions...9
Re: joyriding by Bill Z Bub	27-Dec-02/3:36 PM
lovely words...10
Re: The primates fate (chrystal ball foot switch) by Bachus	26-Dec-02/3:51 PM
8
Re: Circled Numbered Madness by rick	26-Dec-02/3:45 PM
powerful, love the "lunatic tic tic," nice touch...7
Re: In Loving Memory of Myself by Owner of the Sky	26-Dec-02/3:42 PM
haha i like the ending...its wonderful...6
Re: Phillip by w~* ATHENA *~w	26-Dec-02/3:41 PM
i like this....but i cant quite figure out what you're saying...3
Re: Blinded by Your Kiss by ThoughtfulSoul	26-Dec-02/3:32 PM
i like the idea, and i liked how you worded it...but it needs more...the stanzas seem too short to really pack a punch
Re: Things by Quarton	26-Dec-02/2:53 PM
wow...this is simply amazing. i love "inhumanity served medium rare"...and your rhyme scheme...its breathtaking and intense and beautiful and a TEN!!
Re: dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined	26-Dec-02/2:39 PM
oh man i love this...had to read it a few times to get it all straight, but its wonderful!!...8
Re: Good Love by w~* ATHENA *~w	26-Dec-02/2:35 PM
i dont know...somethings missing. theres no rhythm..no flow..and i dont quite see the whole picture...4
Re: Your sacrifice by Crakyamuni	26-Dec-02/2:31 PM
dude....that was powerful and intense and true and amazing and a 10
Re: The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird	24-Dec-02/6:11 PM
hahaha thats really cute, and the rhyme scheme is done quite nicely