on Russian Roulette by <~>
27 Dec 2002, 7:12 PM
this is AMAZING....i mean its so....amazing...i love that last stanza...ten all the way
replying on im playing basketball by rockinindividual
27 Dec 2002, 6:07 PM
i dont even know what my anger was about...often i just go out and play when i feel something boiling up inside me that i cant contain and just want to get rid of. i'll think about your advice though...i can see a story coming out of this...thank you!
on Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl
27 Dec 2002, 4:12 PM
seems too short...you're reading and then its like "wait...where did the rest of the poem go?"...5
on A Short Letter by Ranger
27 Dec 2002, 4:11 PM
'for at night these words seem so much coarser'...totally true...9
on Friends Beyond the Storm by loneshadow29
27 Dec 2002, 4:07 PM
lovely poem...8
on On a chill morning by razorgrin
27 Dec 2002, 3:49 PM
9
on Deep Inner Pain by razorgrin
27 Dec 2002, 3:45 PM
haha i love this. i sliced a chunk off my thumb with a cheese grater once. evil things, those metal contraptions...9
on joyriding by Bill Z Bub
27 Dec 2002, 3:36 PM
lovely words...10
on The primates fate (chrystal ball foot switch) by Bachus
26 Dec 2002, 3:51 PM
8
on Circled Numbered Madness by rick
26 Dec 2002, 3:45 PM
powerful, love the "lunatic tic tic," nice touch...7
on In Loving Memory of Myself by Owner of the Sky
26 Dec 2002, 3:42 PM
haha i like the ending...its wonderful...6
on Phillip by w~* ATHENA *~w
26 Dec 2002, 3:41 PM
i like this....but i cant quite figure out what you're saying...3
on Blinded by Your Kiss by ThoughtfulSoul
26 Dec 2002, 3:32 PM
i like the idea, and i liked how you worded it...but it needs more...the stanzas seem too short to really pack a punch
on dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined
26 Dec 2002, 2:39 PM
oh man i love this...had to read it a few times to get it all straight, but its wonderful!!...8
on Good Love by w~* ATHENA *~w
26 Dec 2002, 2:35 PM
i dont know...somethings missing. theres no rhythm..no flow..and i dont quite see the whole picture...4
on Your sacrifice by Crakyamuni
26 Dec 2002, 2:31 PM
dude....that was powerful and intense and true and amazing and a 10
on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird
24 Dec 2002, 6:11 PM
hahaha thats really cute, and the rhyme scheme is done quite nicely