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Circled Numbered Madness (Free verse) by rick
tic tic tic
go fingerless hands through the asylum
insanity clicks thought silence
sole stolen by circled numbered madness
tic tic tic
half sleeping solemnly on the padded floor
of this padded palace where lopsided clocks
keep constant track of the restless night
tic tic tic
only interrupted by inanimate intercommed voices
that call forebodingly from speakers
over outdated clocks on confinements walls
tic tic tic
again the clocks incessant clicking
a raving repeating reminder
of a life long lost in infinate monotany
tic tic tic
the endless tick of eternity
filling and filling my emptiness
chilling hands count seconds and years
tic tic tic
still screaming its silent madness
as I tell this tortured tale
a white haired, warehoused, lunatic tic tic
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.857143
Weighted score: 4.6926384
Overall Rank: 12041
Posted: October 23, 2002 5:50 PM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2002 5:50 PM PDT
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