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Lasting Forever (Free verse) by angel_uy
Sitting next to me Day after day Always puts a smile on my face So easy to talk to Will always be there He has the most soft caring eyes That I love to watch Laughter that seems to never end With fun still to come A new friendship Intriging, exciting, lasting forever.
Up the ladder: Circled Numbered Madness
Down the ladder: All Alone
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.857143
Weighted score: 4.6926384
Overall Rank: 12037
Posted: October 25, 2002 4:06 PM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2002 4:06 PM PDT
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Comments:
[6] rockinindividual @ 66.171.38.29 | 27-Dec-02/7:39 PM | Reply
sweet but short...perhaps a little too...6
[6] [mojo] @ 195.92.168.176 | 29-Dec-02/3:44 AM | Reply
Pleasant enough, but could do with a bit more "zing". Perhaps you could tell us more about this character? .6.
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 12-Feb-04/3:45 AM | Reply
convincingly conveyed hope.
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