Lasting Forever

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Oct 2002 · 3 comments

Sitting next to me Day after day Always puts a smile on my face So easy to talk to Will always be there He has the most soft caring eyes That I love to watch Laughter that seems to never end With fun still to come A new friendship Intriging, exciting, lasting forever.

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[6] rockinindividual 27-Dec-02/7:39 PM Reply

sweet but short...perhaps a little too...6

[6] [mojo] 29-Dec-02/3:44 AM Reply

Pleasant enough, but could do with a bit more "zing". Perhaps you could tell us more about this character? .6.

[8] Shuushin 12-Feb-04/3:45 AM Reply

convincingly conveyed hope.