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Your sacrifice (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
Christmas is fireplaces and eggnog, sappy hands and sappy hearts, love
and affection... but sometimes
Sometimes, it's the scars of a poor family whose house has burned to
the ground
Without when most are with, contradicting the smiles and pure joy of
the neighbors children in their large family room window
If there is a god- I swear he sees you...But don't expect any favors
Just savor this pain and tend your third degree burns on this day after
Let your tragedy always remind those around you of the way our
celebrated benevolance could only afford so much
I thought the pain of solitude on christmas was horrible, until I
stopped to recognize the despair in the eyes of your beautiful mother
fighting back screams of injustice pointed like menacing shotguns at
the heavens
Your misfortune on our so-called saviors surfacing day
has brought me solace
and given me vision
we of this fat and blind nation owe you
and in our ignorance we find bliss
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.571429
Weighted score: 5.153681
Overall Rank: 5194
Posted: December 26, 2002 1:52 PM PST; Last modified: December 26, 2002 1:52 PM PST
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