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Untitled (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly I'm not to good at being exact
on telling you how I feel
But its getting hard keeping my heart intact
And I dont know how to deal
I hear you talk about another
And it tears me up inside
But these feelings I have I just cant cover
So I have to decide
Do I take a chance and say what I think
Or do I hold it deep in my soul
Have I found the piece that is my missing link
Or in my heart is there another hole
Please tell me cause I need to know the truth
Do you feel the same for me
Let me know while I'm still in my youth
Just how its gonna be
How did it feel
You know what I mean
Tell me it was real
And not in a dream
My times running short
So tell me what to do
I aint gonna lie
I think I love you
Up the ladder:
The Yellow Penguin
Down the ladder:
Your sacrifice
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Posted: December 24, 2002 2:47 AM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2002 2:47 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.153681 Overall Rank: 5193 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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24-Dec-02/12:20 PM
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i went to your homepage. i think i love you too.
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Sugarbbybuttrfly @ 152.163.189.171
> horus8
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24-Dec-02/10:12 PM
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Um...thank you...I think?
.....and they called it puppy love..oh I guess they'll never know (paul anka)....60s version of Timberlake....when you have to think about it then my sweet one...you're not in love....have an oreo...it will make you feel better....ahhhhh
Yes, your right. I wasn't in love with the person this was about. But I have been in love and I know what it's like. Oh and yeah, I know who Paul Anka is and I do happen to know that song. Very sad how you think that I don't know good music from shit music because I live in a time when it's all about the "pop" music. Give me a little credit friend. I'm not as 'adolescent' you seem to think I am. Also, thank you for the Oreo. It did make me feel better. Yummy.
You're 16 right? Your poetry is good, but try to diversify the areas in which you write. Ahhh...my apologies madam...it's good to know that our youth knows who Paul Anka is....I'm in my early 20s...ahhh, but I feel old, older at least.
19 now, so no reason to feel old. But I think I might have been around 16 when that was written. Only a few of the things I have posted are recent. I just liked the others.
It's around 4:30am in PA...you must be an insomniac like me...or maybe you can't sleep because Santa is bringing you lots of presents.....oooooh...open up the blue one..it's from me....ahhhh...a book of short poems by Horus8. Enjoy!
Yes, insomniac I am. And sleep brings dreams, which then lead to a world of false hopes. So I tried to avoid it. Just enough shut eye to get me through the day. And I looked for your thoughtful gift but it doesn't seem to be here. Are you sure you had Santa bring it to the right house?
why drag horus8 into the mix? he doesn't write short books of poetry any more he's retired to pick olives in Greece. i will be running his estate here, and i will be dealing with you hands on in the future. you will refer to horus8 as what was, and me as his turd cutter. that is all.
Be thankful...at least I didn't get you old man river's collection...it was out of print...nobody bought it.
Ahhh, but false hopes make the world go round. For if you didn't have false hopes then your existance would be completely meaningless to say the least. Perhaps it is....but false hopes are there to keep you from seeing this...get it?..yes...here's a shot of tequila...oh...let's not forget to chew the worm...it's a good source of protein...
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