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The Yellow Penguin (Ode) by ahmyerda Fickle Biscuit
snide and contrite
in your shitey wee wrapper.
A couple with my cuppa
every night at six o'clock
turns me into a fat arsehole.
Up the ladder:
The Bomb
Down the ladder:
Untitled
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Posted: December 9, 2002 1:54 PM PST; Last modified: December 9, 2002 1:54 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.153681 Overall Rank: 5192 Comments:
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Jigg @ 62.7.83.42
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9-Dec-02/4:10 PM
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Well let's see it started pretty badly, it tailed off in the middle and the less said about the end the better but on teh whole quite quite brilliant, well done ahmyerda, well done have a biscuit, or don't. Nae cunt likes a fat arsehole
oh come on. don't exaggerate..."would you care for one waifer thin mint".
i'll have the lot.
and don't skimp on the pate'.
Ees eet only WAAAfer theen?
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