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The Bomb (Free verse) by anitawit
(10.6.86) Under layers and layers of tissue Wrung together by evolution Lie my grey cells, activated and ticking At the slightest metabolic signal Ready to explode.

Up the ladder: Bleeding
Down the ladder: The Yellow Penguin

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.571429
Weighted score: 5.153681
Overall Rank: 5190
Posted: November 9, 2002 11:40 AM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2002 11:40 AM PST
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[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228 | 9-Nov-02/1:53 PM | Reply
This is pretty good. I hope your "grey cells" aren't cancerous or infectious or anything.
[n/a] anitawit @ 203.197.226.9 > INTRANSIT | 10-Nov-02/11:46 AM | Reply
Thanks.
They aren't 'cancerous' or 'infectious' (at least not yet), can't vouch for the 'anything'.
[7] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 | 9-Nov-02/2:36 PM | Reply
and then...?
[n/a] anitawit @ 203.197.226.9 > <~> | 10-Nov-02/11:48 AM | Reply
Still ticking...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 | 22-Nov-02/9:56 AM | Reply
It is a sin to believe in evolution.
[n/a] anitawit @ 203.197.210.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 22-Nov-02/11:28 AM | Reply
I am no christian...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 > anitawit | 22-Nov-02/12:04 PM | Reply
I beg your pardon... ? It is a sin not to be a christian
[n/a] anitawit @ 203.197.210.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 22-Nov-02/12:20 PM | Reply
Well, what can I say to that? For you- there are more sinners in this world than you had reckoned for.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 > anitawit | 22-Nov-02/12:31 PM | Reply
All men are sinners
[n/a] anitawit @ 203.200.110.135 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 22-Nov-02/12:34 PM | Reply
Amen
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 > anitawit | 22-Nov-02/12:47 PM | Reply
Gentlemen aren't sinners because Gentlemen are christians.
[n/a] anitawit @ 203.197.200.188 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 24-Nov-02/10:53 AM | Reply
Gentlemen aren't men
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 > anitawit | 26-Nov-02/2:05 PM | Reply
are
[n/a] anitawit @ 219.65.234.247 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 27-Nov-02/10:44 AM | Reply
Gentlemen are.
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