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Bleeding (Free verse) by invernalmariposa I so desperately wanted to be loved by you,
but in return for my heart
I got tears in my pillow
as I cried myself to sleep.
You made me bleed,
you took the crimson wine of my soul
and drank down my pain
with a smile on your face.
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Posted: October 27, 2002 8:37 PM PST; Last modified: October 27, 2002 8:39 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.153681 Overall Rank: 5189 Comments:
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27-Oct-02/8:48 PM
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i know the feeling....
The last two or three lines are perhaps of value.
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