Bleeding

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Oct 2002 · Edited 27 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

I so desperately wanted to be loved by you, but in return for my heart I got tears in my pillow as I cried myself to sleep. You made me bleed, you took the crimson wine of my soul and drank down my pain with a smile on your face.

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[8] deleted user 27-Oct-02/8:48 PM Reply

i know the feeling....

[4] Tintagiles 28-Oct-02/7:56 PM Reply

The last two or three lines are perhaps of value.