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The TRust That Was Unreal (by WOOTNESS) (Free verse) by xanatos
Anger fills my every thought,
Thinking of things I forgot.
Of all the things I should have said,
To get me by another day.
All the times I found out how i feel,
I held it all inside until I met you.
You told me to let it all out without a care,
Express to the world that life's unfair.
But never have I trusted someone so much,
With every single caressing touch.
Thoughts of you flash in my head,
Then sometimes I wish you were dead.
Then when I see or hear your voice,
It makes me feel like I have no choice.
But to feel so ignorant compared to you,
And some of the things that you would do.
I'd ask myself why I would let you make me feel that way,
Then I remembered you told me that if I trusted you, you would make
everything okay.
~wootness
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.571429
Weighted score: 5.153681
Overall Rank: 5189
Posted: October 3, 2002 5:34 PM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2002 5:38 PM PDT
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