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The TRust That Was Unreal (by WOOTNESS) (Free verse) by xanatos
Anger fills my every thought, Thinking of things I forgot. Of all the things I should have said, To get me by another day. All the times I found out how i feel, I held it all inside until I met you. You told me to let it all out without a care, Express to the world that life's unfair. But never have I trusted someone so much, With every single caressing touch. Thoughts of you flash in my head, Then sometimes I wish you were dead. Then when I see or hear your voice, It makes me feel like I have no choice. But to feel so ignorant compared to you, And some of the things that you would do. I'd ask myself why I would let you make me feel that way, Then I remembered you told me that if I trusted you, you would make everything okay. ~wootness

Up the ladder: The Cross Foxes
Down the ladder: Bleeding

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.571429
Weighted score: 5.153681
Overall Rank: 5189
Posted: October 3, 2002 5:34 PM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2002 5:38 PM PDT
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[9] little_angel_maria @ 213.122.88.52 | 4-Oct-02/2:23 AM | Reply
i loe this poem its wicked girl
[3] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.69 | 27-Oct-02/7:03 PM | Reply
I saw someone who looked exactly like Chris Elliot today but he was selling postcards and knicknacks.
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