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The TRust That Was Unreal (by WOOTNESS)

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Oct 2002 · Edited 3 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

Anger fills my every thought, Thinking of things I forgot. Of all the things I should have said, To get me by another day. All the times I found out how i feel, I held it all inside until I met you. You told me to let it all out without a care, Express to the world that life's unfair. But never have I trusted someone so much, With every single caressing touch. Thoughts of you flash in my head, Then sometimes I wish you were dead. Then when I see or hear your voice, It makes me feel like I have no choice. But to feel so ignorant compared to you, And some of the things that you would do. I'd ask myself why I would let you make me feel that way, Then I remembered you told me that if I trusted you, you would make everything okay. ~wootness

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[9] little_angel_maria 4-Oct-02/2:23 AM Reply
i loe this poem its wicked girl
[3] -=SeTTle=- 27-Oct-02/7:03 PM Reply
I saw someone who looked exactly like Chris Elliot today but he was selling postcards and knicknacks.