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Bleeding (Free verse) by invernalmariposa

I so desperately wanted to be loved by you, but in return for my heart I got tears in my pillow as I cried myself to sleep. You made me bleed, you took the crimson wine of my soul and drank down my pain with a smile on your face.

Tintagiles 28-Oct-02/7:56 PM
The last two or three lines are perhaps of value.




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