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Bleeding
(
Free verse
) by
invernalmariposa
I so desperately wanted to be loved by you, but in return for my heart I got tears in my pillow as I cried myself to sleep. You made me bleed, you took the crimson wine of my soul and drank down my pain with a smile on your face.
Tintagiles
28-Oct-02/7:56 PM
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