| Re: "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus |
4-Jun-03/9:24 AM |
I'm not in the prawn(e) posse but i line 3 is to die 9 lives for.
For making me snigger 8 (I refuse to laugh its far too wanky)
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| Re: a comment on Hunting God by Shardik |
4-Jun-03/9:21 AM |
Is Picasso really dead? I paid a gypsy fifty quid for 'an early work' got a dead goldfish in a plastic bag too.
(where you been Z? )
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| Re: Hunting God by Shardik |
4-Jun-03/9:19 AM |
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Dont shoot picasso the sound of the gun would screw his other ear up. This has a cult quality to it. Needless to say I diggit 8
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| Re: A Summers Day In Stolen Eden by Mr Pig |
27-May-03/3:45 PM |
Obi Wan has taught you well.
Join the dark side (ooooopppppaaaar)
Your still my muse this is so rich in detail
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| Re: The Order Of Things by Mr Pig |
20-May-03/11:42 AM |
What can I say huh? this is what you do best and its a silky read your a true maestro at this stuff, fuck the haiku stick to freeform this is where your awesome. Aint Cathy a bitch ?
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| Re: Symbol Of Love by simone_girard |
20-May-03/11:39 AM |
Listen man, stop reading Barb Cartland get out into the MAtrix and spread your virus elsewhere this is as bad as a blow job from 10 years of marriage.
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| Re: may 18 by Bill Z Bub |
20-May-03/11:36 AM |
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I remember reading your poems a long time ago and though they were inspiring you REALLY are the cat in silk pajamas now. I'll keep this real: this rocks
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| Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig |
10-Apr-03/7:52 AM |
Why did you delete my other comment? Anyway only you could have but in my hotel room i found this and thought hmmm I wonder why you posted such a personal poem. I like it a lot because I know you can belt out some real gold and this you have chosen to be frank and honest.
Take care amigo.
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| Re: Down Lovers Lane by Mr Pig |
9-Apr-03/2:07 AM |
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very nice bud, however not as inspirational as the blooding, but still as a concept piece, pretty damn fuckin fine.
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| Re: all in my head by calilegzzz |
2-Apr-03/8:39 AM |
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This is a brown sticky nappy. 3
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| Re: Sofia by daniella |
7-Mar-03/6:36 AM |
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your writing has evolved to high standard, be proud dan
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| Re: Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe |
7-Mar-03/6:29 AM |
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| Re: Sofia by daniella |
7-Mar-03/6:28 AM |
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| Re: just as we were by daniella |
7-Mar-03/6:27 AM |
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made me think of happy times and booking a holiday 7
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| Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
7-Mar-03/3:15 AM |
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Read this again, and it improves every time
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| Re: Revelation ( 666 ) by Mr Pig |
21-Feb-03/2:37 AM |
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Profound, just out on the counts on some but otherwise thoughtful and very good ...10
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| Re: Weekend at the Taj by <~> |
19-Feb-03/3:54 AM |
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travel the world with me Z, with a stopover in the elvis drive through Vegas, I'll pay for the Howard Johnson's and motel6 and you pay for the fuel, I know how to treat rock chix, this is ice ..8
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| Re: To Laugh Or Cry by casey |
18-Feb-03/11:40 AM |
BETTER THAN THE OTHER ONE, BUT ALAS STILL POO ...4
IMMORTALIZE BEAUTY IN PERSONNIFYING MORE THAN THE OBVIOUS, DESCRIBE HOW YOU FEEL, LOYAL TO YOUR FEELINGS, NOT THE RHYME STRUCTURE.....
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| Re: Close by casey |
18-Feb-03/11:38 AM |
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sorry but this is a turd, 3 IS ALL I CAN MUSTER
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| Re: Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones |
18-Feb-03/11:37 AM |
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oh god what have you done, my secrets out ..shit #7
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