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Hunting God

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 May 2003 · Edited 3 Jun 2003 · 10 comments

Being a hunter has never been so pleasant. I even shine those rifles in my dreams. I can't shoot dope, so I'll just shoot pheasant. A social busy bee in a lazy worker ant. A Labeled side effect of screams. Being a hunter has never been so pleasant. Why say you can, when they know you can't? Keep little boy fingers out of those creams. I can't shoot Pope, so I'll just shoot pheasant. An angel made of gravy alah-nappy wipe of rant. Tired of restitching the same ol'e torn seams? Being a hunter has never been so pleasant? Are "We the people" not the 'we in residence'? But killing that mockin' bird aint all it seems. I can't shoot Pope, so I'll just shoot pheasant. I have no more rebuttle, no more recant. A tempoless temple of beamingless beams. Being a hunter has never been so fucking lame. I can't shoot dope, so I'll just shoot Picasso.

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[7] richa 4-May-03/6:48 AM Reply

I am always impressed by vilanelles, like the bit about cant shoot dope and a busy social bee

[n/a] zzinnia66 3-Jun-03/6:01 PM Reply

the party's over, sunshine.
<whine> the perry's, though known ravers, made a case to the master, and plagiary's no joke, any more.

p.s. picasso's already dead.
site the next picasso's head.

[8] scitz › zzinnia66 4-Jun-03/9:21 AM Reply

Is Picasso really dead? I paid a gypsy fifty quid for 'an early work' got a dead goldfish in a plastic bag too.

(where you been Z? )

[n/a] zzinnia66 › scitz 4-Jun-03/9:27 AM Reply

goldfish make lovely fertilizer for citrus trees, you know.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › zzinnia66 4-Jun-03/9:51 AM Reply

do they make it in a secret underwater factory lol asl?

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Jun-03/10:02 AM Reply

my eyes are wet
with the wet tears of sadness
how can I live without you?
when we first met
my heart filled with gladness
but you were an goldfish
so I crushed you (into fertiliser)

[n/a] <~> › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Jun-03/10:58 AM Reply

are you sure it wasn't your nappy that you wetted?

[n/a] Shardik › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Jun-03/11:35 AM Reply

What in the name of Christ are you psychos talking about? OOps, it's plug time.

http://www.garageband.com/go/1WU8P9SB89

Wack!

[n/a] <~> › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Jun-03/10:57 AM Reply

WELL, IT'S CERTAINLY NOT AN SECRET ANY MORE!

[8] scitz 4-Jun-03/9:19 AM Reply

Dont shoot picasso the sound of the gun would screw his other ear up. This has a cult quality to it. Needless to say I diggit 8